There are a few mistakes in pitch, one at the start then a couple at the end. Your rhythm is fine in places, but remember the semiquavers (2 beams joining the notes) should be twice as fast as the quavers (1 beams joining the notes). Your reflection is too short. There is some detail there but it should be expanded upon.
There are a few mistakes in pitch, one at the start then a couple at the end. Your rhythm is fine in places, but remember the semiquavers (2 beams joining the notes) should be twice as fast as the quavers (1 beams joining the notes). Your reflection is too short. There is some detail there but it should be expanded upon.
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